Richardson Adventure Farm - ID# 61

John Hersey High School

News Package

Entry Description

This news package was about the Richardson Adventure Farm and their new corn maze design for October 2016.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/7 11:45 am - Informative and interesting. The camera work is fantastic and makes this piece come to life. Would have liked to see a transition between interviews to enhance the element of storytelling.
• 3/5 4:04 pm - A very well crafted story with fantastic visuals. The first interview is set up well, but the second could have made better use of natural light. We get a significant shadow on the subject's face. Interesting details and very engaging. Well done!

Judge 1

Positives: - Excellent job building up to the corn maze in your storytelling. - Your video matches what we're hearing throughout the piece.

Improvements: - It would be fun to hear from one or two people visiting the maze. the maze means - You seem to be a good and conversational storyteller. I would love to hear more narration from you in place of some of the interview sound.

Judge 2

Positives: Lots of things worked well in this story. Interviews looked and were informative. There was good integration of interviews with b-roll. A very good effort at using interviews to tell the story. A fun piece to watch.

Improvements: I would have liked to have known that this is the largest Maze farm in the world earlier. Could have used the sign earlier or said it in the early via narration. A few sound bites from visitors about why they came and what they liked about their corn maze adventure would have been nice.

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