Little Big House - ID# 69

Glenbrook South

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

Lottie did not plan to return to the house of her nightmares filled with harsh memories, and a decision she never expected to make.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/7 9:03 am - Great tracking shot with mirror in shot and no crew/equipment reflection.
• 3/4 1:14 pm - Beautifully shot and edited. Some really cool editing effects in second half. Acting is a bit stilted. Music at very end does not really fit. Could hang on to ending moment instead of showing her walking out of house, anticlimactic.

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