Islamophobia - ID# 81

Glenbrook South

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Entry Description

A look into the religion of Islam, which isn't always given the treatment they deserve.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/27 12:48 pm - The color and composition on the two shots are great. The voiceover audio level was perfect throughout and sends a powerful message. It ends rather abruptly, a slow fade out would help.
• 3/5 2:57 pm - A nice use of the actual speech here. The slow zoom was very effective and steady, but it would have been nice to see some other shots or to have it zoom in on the flag. It was nice to see the subject in a regular setting at the end, but again, some variety of shots might have helped.
• 3/1 11:56 am - The voice over of Obama was extremely powerful. Loved the opening shot. Maybe second location could've been a mosque or somewhere more powerful.

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