Don't Talk Yourself Into It - ID# 84
Glenbrook South
Public Service Announcement
Entry Description
A PSA on the importance of not driving when intoxicated.
Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/27 10:54 am - The music behind the video worked well. Try and build a little more anticipation before the climax of the video. Overall great message.
- 3/2 10:14 am - More variety of shots would make video more interesting.
- 2/27 8:17 pm - The shots at the start were interesting and well lit. A higher angle shot looking down at intoxicated Jake would have been a nice match to the low angle looking up. The car shot lighting was a bit low making it a stark contrast to the int. shots. While the audio gave made an impact at the end, the shots didn't quite match up impactfully. Some more variety in shots at the end and quicker edits might have helped.
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