Model United Nations News Package - ID# 89

Glenbrook South

News Package

Entry Description

A two minute news package covering Glenbrook South High Shcool's award winning Model UN team.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/7 12:35 pm - Great opening to your package. Like the development of your story from the success to what the club means to students. Wish the packages had transitions between soundbites as opposed to the fade to black.
• 3/5 4:15 pm - I loved hearing the effects on the students of having this as a part of their school. This is very well organized. Great variety in shots, perspectives, and opinions. Two things that are less effective: the fade to black before the student interviews (feels conclusive, when it's not meant to be), and the slow fade to b-roll when the coach/sponsor is speaking at about 1:38 (it distracts from what he says).

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