A Weight Loss Journey - ID# 102

Homewood-Flossmoor

Division: A

Documentary

Entry Description

Following a girl who lost lots of weight.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/24 9:08 pm - Tough to compete with human interest/social conscience pieces entered in this category, but this piece really appeals to a teen-target audience. Technically sound.
• 3/5 4:56 pm - Such a great idea for a story. Your writing is spot on! Broll is excellent, you take us on a journey and we are with you along for this ride- but it ends a little abruptly. Music competes with your interviews, your bridges and it is very distracting.

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