Internet Safety PSA - ID# 139

Marist

Division: AA

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

PSA for internet safety.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/8 10:49 am - Girl is on a laptop but the texting screen shows a phone. Good way to convey message, kept my interest. The end cut too quick. I didn't have a chance to read the entire text and see her reaction. Also music just cuts out.

Judge 1

Positives: Seeing the text messages worked well. I like the message to not trust everything you encounter on the internet.

Improvements: More camera shots. I liked where you could see the girls face and still read the text messages on the side. More like that with some extreme close-ups of her eyes or her fingers tapping on the keyboard. Use more camera shots and angles at the end too to make it more dramatic. Like you see the door slams shut and the video goes to black and you then hear the guy say "I'm Jake"

Judge 2

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Judge 3

Positives: The interaction seems believable and real. I like how you superimposed the text messages over the footage while she was lying to her mom.

Improvements: First line is a little muddy - hard to make it out. The phone interaction that makes up most of this piece gets a little long. Might have been nice to intercut it with some CUs of eyes or other details to give it more interest.

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