Delivery - ID# 14

Oak Park River Forest

Division: AA

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

A pizza delivery boy encounters a nasty surprise while on a delivery.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/24 4:11 pm - Awesome, Music, Camera, Composition, Pace, Edit, Story, Color grading, Angles and Story! Excellent.
• 4/10 10:33 am - You have definitely mastered your camera and editing equipment, kudos to executing the technicalities so well. Furthermore, amazing commitment to the bit. I assume the props, from the chair and carpet to the clothes and everything else, were brought in so you didn’t ruin someone’s house; again, hats off to your commitment. My only technical comment is in regard to the ending music which seemed warped somehow. Otherwise, great storyline, beautiful build-up between the action and the music, fantastic shot choices and movements, and overall exquisite editing. You have a lot of skills and a great eye and ear for editing, keep up the fantastic work
• 4/2 11:43 am - Delivery Color graded beautifully Great special effects Wonderfully shot Aesthetically nicely done overall Audio well mixed Hilarious Copyrighted music

Judge 1

Positives: Awesome camera work and lighting/sound!

Improvements: I got nuthin'.

Judge 2

Positives: Hands down - this one killed it! Clearly, Liam's a student of film and it shows in every single decision he made in the making of this short. Strong, strong story. Very simple but a great example of the importance of a strong beginning, middle and end. Great "get" on this one. Funny payoff. Unexpected. Liam, good luck with your career in the industry. I have now doubt in your abilities.

Improvements: I've thought about this question for a few days now and I keep coming back to this lonely box on the form. It would be easy to say NOTHING CAN BE IMPROVED, as well as appropriate. So I'll leave it at that -- I have nothing to criticize in this one. I'll be sending you my resume Liam. Maybe one day you'll hire me ;)

Judge 3

Positives: Great shooting....nice steady cam at beginning...great choices of shots and angles....well edited and professional

Improvements: I wouldn't change a thing

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