What's Your Vision? - ID# 148

Neuqua Valley
Division: A
School Promotion

Entry Description

A promotional video for the Neuqua Valley Media Department, featuring students from all Media class levels, made by the Production III+IV class.

Recent Teacher Comments

  • 3/13 11:23 am - VO's sound like reading and are not natural. Do more takes, and work with your actors to get a more natural performance.
  • 3/13 11:23 am - Good shot variety with many interesting shots, but there are too many shots of empty halls or empty chairs that don't transition into activity or action in that location. Some shots have lighting issues.
  • 3/12 11:48 am - Pros: great graphics in the beginning, good music choice and interviews Needs work: some shots were a little shaky Overall: a cool promo for your program!
  • 3/12 9:52 am - Nice promo for your program, for sure. I like the variety of shots and sound bites (though they sounded somewhat rehearsed; the interviews sounded really genuine). The use of the projector and different lighting techniques was a nice touch-- the typography animation in the beginning was also a nice add-- shows the variety of skills one can acquire in the program. The music choice was good and established a nice pace with which to edit to. If I was a student that was interested in media production and saw this piece, I would be excited-- well done.
  • 2/28 9:20 am - Good choice of music. The studio footage is a little dark but a clever idea. The transition from the intro to the interviews could be a little smoother and is kind of harsh from creative text to a person being interviewed. Some of the handheld shots are a little too shaky, rocking back and forth. Overall a very good promo with some unique shots and risk taking. Good job.
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