Found - ID# 153

Glenbrook South
Division: A
School Promotion

Entry Description

A promotion for "Found," our school's 2018 Variety Show.

Recent Teacher Comments

  • 3/13 11:19 am - Multiple audio clips are not always balanced, or the audio quality doesn't always match. It's a good idea to test the audio when you're working in a variety of locations.
  • 3/13 11:18 am - Really engaging way to tell this story and feature different individuals in different ways with still images. The variety in which you present each student, in single or multiplle still images with various timing strategies is very engaging; good job timing to music.
  • 3/12 11:44 am - The pictures are cool but I think it would've added more to the video if you had video of the kids not just stills.
  • 3/12 9:37 am - Good use of sound bites and stills. I wasn't sure where it was going with what seemed like a slide show early on, but near the end you did a good job of pulling it together into something significant with all the pictures etc. I didn't get the sense that this was a promo piece for a variety show per se', rather a school culture piece to get students involved and proud of their school? If it works for both, than all the better!
  • 2/28 9:04 am - More of a slideshow with a voiceover than a video. However very well done and makes a powerful statement. Could use more voices and cleaned up audio without "likes" and don't be afraid to have students repeat what they said and have them say it perhaps with a different tone, louder or more passionately.
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