Meet the Lunch Ladies - ID# 164

Mundelein

Division: AA

News Package

Entry Description

News story created to put names and stories to people students see every day, the Lunch Ladies. Who are they and why do they do what they do?

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/10 11:05 am - This piece had a great pace with some very nice B-Roll and solid interviews. I commend you for capturing the sound so well in a busy and noisy cafeteria and I appreciate that for almost every person you were able to get them working in real time rather than just the interview. It shows a real dedication to the task. Moving forward, especially when producing a news package, I would encourage you to use your own abilities as an anchor to set the tone of the piece with either an anchor introduction or voice-over both at the opening of the piece and again at the end for a conclusion. This piece feels like it’s missing that element of being a news package since we don’t have that anchor guiding through the story arch. Otherwise, this has a lot of promising details. Keep up the great work!

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