Boys Soccer Video - ID# 168

Libertyville

Division: AA

School Promotion

Entry Description

A Promotional Video representing the Libertyville High School Boy's Varsity Soccer Team.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/6 3:49 pm - Good upbeat music. Nice job isolating each of the players. Hard to see, but if you didn’t, be sure to add a drop shadow to the text any time you place it over video so it stands out from that video. Any other cut-away shots you can use instead of them shooting into the goal? Variety is always good.
• 3/12 11:53 am - Nice promo. Good music. Gets the viewer excited about the season and familiar with the faces on the team.
• 3/12 11:53 am - Don't fade the audio when the schedule comes up. Keep it going.
• 3/12 11:52 am - Good selections of the practice highlights. I like the angle behind the player.
• 3/12 11:51 am - Fonts could be bigger or popped out somehow. Use an outline? Drop shadow? Something to make it stand out more.
• 3/12 11:51 am - The introductions of the players are a little long. Let the players complete their action, then cut to the next player. However, this is a great way to introduce the team.

Judge 1

Positives: Story - The hero shots using inside jokes and elements of personality let's the viewer feel in on the personality of the team.

Improvements: Editing - the pace of the cut seemed to slow down the excitement. More quick cuts and more game footage would add excitement. Camera - A few tight shots of game film would bring the viewer "closer" to the action.

Judge 2

Positives: the cuts were clean. editing matched with music

Improvements: lower third titles could have been more visible and vibrant, footage looked slightly overexsposed

Judge 3

Positives: Good camera work and nice editing to the music

Improvements: It was a little long, could have been quicker and accomplished in 1:00. It got a little hokey with some of the stunts.

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