Tech Crew - ID# 179

Riverside Brookfield

Division: A

Documentary

Entry Description

This documentary showcases the students who work on Tech Crew for the theatrical events at RB High School. Through interviews and b-roll, the viewer will learn about this dedicated group of students.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/24 8:55 pm - Tough to compete with human interest/social conscience pieces entered in this category. Needs fewer long stretches of talking heads, and more b-roll over them.
• 3/8 4:33 pm - My first reaction is - this is a news package - what will make this a documentary...Where is the nat sound? You are “telling”not "showing"… The subjects seem rather unenthused and it makes me feel less excited to learn about tech crew. This is a news package and not a documentary. That said, the camera and sound fundamentals are in place.
• 3/5 3:55 pm - I could not see the film. It stops after a few seconds.

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