Hi My Name Is Caroline - ID# 198

Maine South

Division: AA

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

The world is ending in 72 hours. How would you cope?

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/2 11:31 am - Hi My Name is Caroline Interesting variety of shots Some shots were on a little too long Inconsistent audio levels Would have made more sense if all of the different versions of Caroline were played by the same person Shots didn’t usually add anything to story or help tell it Bathroom scene was weird
• 3/11 12:13 pm - Story: I think there’s some good stuff here. You reveal the story of the impending asteroid apocalypse at a pace that keeps me interested up until I get it. After that, I have to admit, it gets less interesting to me. Camera: I like the effects you put on the girls being interviewed- especially the black and white animated-looking one. I also like the time lapse of the planes taking off from O’Hare, but I think you stay on it too long. By the end it’s too dark to see anything. The rest of your camera work looks like random junk. I don’t have anything very positive to say about it. Lighting: Not strong. Sound: This could use some attention. Your levels are not especially consistent. Editing: Hard to evaluate. It’s pretty low-level stuff. Final Thoughts: If there’s any kind of rhyme or reason to this, it escaped me.

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