Flies in the Editing Lab - ID# 205

Morton East

Division: AA

Movie Trailer

Entry Description

Movie Trailer for the motion picture "Flies in the Editing Lab".

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/11 4:13 pm - https://drive.google.com/file/d/1_3pPgwG0Daz1cdNDAndyBi2fLBJwdp5p/view?usp=sharing
• 3/3 11:51 am - Story: I wish there were more to the story that the title doesn’t already make clear. Camera: Some decent work here, but it seems like your main focus was to shoot in a way to incorporate the animation. You do that fairly effectively, but there’s not much else to say about your camera work. It’s fine but not especially interesting. Lighting: Solid. No red flags. Sound: Also fine. Editing: Also fine. Final thoughts: As an assignment about using animation, this is a success. As a trailer that might actually make me want to see the film, it’s got a way to go. Having said that, I hope you stick with it. I’d love to see what you produce with another year of instruction and practice.

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