BHS Holiday Special - ID# 209

Barrington

Division: AA

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

Barrington High School Presents a "Home Alone" remake, "School Alone" as our Holiday Episode.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/2 11:55 am - good sound design, good lighting, well shot, but it goes over the time limit
• 3/10 1:15 pm - Story: This is fun. Sadly, it’s over the 5 minute mark and will be disqualified. The story is fun and clear. I like the many references and allusions to Home Alone. Clever. Camera: Some fun creativity here as well. In the sequence of him going nuts in the empty school, I think you could have gone farther in having fun with him exploring the school and all the possibilities before him. Lighting: Generally good. Seems like you used available lighting for the most part. No big issues here. Sound: Again, I like the Home Alone callbacks. Good music tracks, generally used quite effectively. Editing: As I said above, I think you could explore ways to have even more fun with him running around the school - jump cuts come to mind. Final Thoughts: Fun idea fairly well executed.

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