Pork Bites - ID# 215

Wheaton Academy
Division: AA
Cinematography

Entry Description

This is a comedic chase scene with a surprise ending

Recent Teacher Comments

  • 4/12 2:52 pm - This might have worked better in Commercial or Comedy- but the shaky camera and lack of fluid shots doesn’t work in this category. The creativity of perspectives is great- a lot of fun to watch and anticipate- but the auto focus in-camera and flat image doesn't work in this category.
  • 3/31 6:42 pm - Camera: -There are some creative shots here! -This doesn not seem to be a reel, but rather a section of a comedic narrative film. -You have great shot variety here and quite a bit of movement. -Pay attention to camera composition and follow the rule of thirds when appropriate. Lighting: -Natural lighting throughout. Part of being a cinematographer is showing how you use light to tell the story, so it would be nice to see more light than just natural light Editing: -Fast pace was appropriate and went with the music.
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