We Are Barrington - ID# 212

Barrington

Division: AA

School Promotion

Entry Description

School Spirit Video

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/6 3:51 pm - Good representation of your school. Good video from a variety of events - consider adding in some of the natural audio - might add another element to the final version.

Judge 1

Positives: Story - No frills. Stays on message. Voiceover lines up with images with a consistent tempo. Cadence of voiceover stretches as video progresses. Sound - Clear VO without breaths mixed at appropriate levels with music. Editing - The right images and VO together. The pace and tempo are consistent.

Improvements: Story - Just a few diction things in the voiceover ('fir' instead of 'for' can make the ears perk a bit). Editing - If the source material is available, could have reinforced the more dramatic music approaching the end of the piece by adding more quick cuts with the drums.

Judge 2

Positives: high quality voice over. there was footage for everything he said

Improvements: could have ended it earlier

Judge 3

Positives: Overall a very well done piece. Good variety of shots with good shot composition. Good use of nat sound and music mix.

Improvements: I think the Voice over could have been more up beat and energetic. Could have color corrected some scenes so the colors match throughout the video.

Judge 4

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