Just Drink Tap - ID# 220

Wheaton Academy

Division: AA

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

This PSA is designed to raise awareness on the negatives of plastic water bottle consumption and the positives of drinking tap water

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/8 4:15 pm - STRENGTHS - Good energy and pacing. I like that you had several testimonial type shots. Important message with good info. QUESTIONS / SUGGESTIONS - Why did you choose that font? It was a bit hard to read, especially over the actor's face.
• 3/8 11:02 am - Interesting concept. Decent light and framing. The 60's/70's font a little hard to read. Dialogue hard to understand in parts (music/mic pickup). Music goes on about 2 1/2 seconds after the video ends.

Judge 1

Positives: Nice job. Nice variance of camera shots and angles. Good information. Sound nice and clear. Nice job with the animation.

Improvements: When the girl says she is going to get a drink from the fountain use a shot of her drinking from the fountain. You had some nice variance of shots and angles but use even more

Judge 2

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Judge 3

Positives: Great stats and effective message. I like the gfx and choice of font.

Improvements: When the statistics are being recited to camera, some shot variety could really help make it visually more interesting. Cutaways to b-roll, stock footage, waterfalls, anything could really add. Even just changing angle on your talent during this part would help.

Judge 4

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