The Holistic Wheaton Academy Student - ID# 222

Wheaton Academy

Division: AA

School Promotion

Entry Description

This quick promo for Wheaton Academy shows the various areas students can engage in while attending the school

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/6 3:49 pm - LIke the concept of how you transition from each area with the hand over the camera - that’s something different. Watch the use of the English language - there was a grammar error when talking about the weightroom (“...and many equipment…”). And right before that - when transitioning from the court to the weightroom, is the only time we don’t see your hand in front of the camera. Anytime you have text over video, add a drop shadow to that text to help it stand out from the video.
• 3/12 11:59 am - Good song choice
• 3/12 11:58 am - Creative use of hand transition to move throughout the school.
• 3/12 11:57 am - Head room and audio levels are a big factor that could use adjustment for the spokesperson.
• 3/12 11:56 am - Good opening title sequence.

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