Tower Gardens at HHS - ID# 234

Huntley

Division: AA

News Package

Entry Description

This new story is about the Huntley High School's LIGHT Program's Tower Gardens and what they are and how their fresh produce will be for salads, etc. in the cafeteria.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/10 11:05 am - This is a great piece with very nice B-Roll that definitely showcases the project. Your voice-over has a nice clear sound and definitely helps narrate the importance of the gardens and why they exist. However, this falls short as a news package because we’re only getting one person’s reaction to it, and as principal, he’s more explaining than reacting. I would have loved to hear from the students involved and what they learned, or from the teachers explaining the learning objectives, or from students who are witnessing this, or even from cafeteria workers and how they plan to use the ingredients. You have a solid foundation of skills here and I encourage you to keep finding the meat of the stories, or the synthetically-grown roots, in this case. Keep up the great work!

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