Newscene - ID# 255

Oak Park River Forest

Division: AA

News Program

Entry Description

An episode of OPRF's biweekly news show.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/9 11:45 am - Talent has nice chemistry and seems confident. Band segment introduces him as a drum major but the segment shows him as a conductor. Nice that you have some news stories mixed in. Good mix of segments and good b-roll. Audio levels are not consistent between anchors and segments.
• 3/8 2:00 pm - Nice quick intro...good energy from the anchors. Sound is a little distant. Consider lav mics or bring your overhead mic a little closer. "Huskie in Focus" is well done. Interesting and nice way to learn about individuals in your school. Nicely shot and edited. Audio is at different levels between segments and studios. "The Monitor" is well-written and delivered. Great delivery by talent. Fun piece on the video game club. Go a little further though...what is it EXACTLY that the video game club does? Do they just get together and play or do they work toward competition? Solid, lighthearted show.

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Judge 2

Positives: Really enjoyed the Huskie in Focus, the Monitor and video game club

Improvements: Huskie in Focus - fun piece but I noticed that some of the nats were really loud and Gabe's audio was a little low. if you're going to report on a story about carjackings - you need to use some graphics or video

Judge 3

Positives: Interesting stories and well written material. Good use of graphics.

Improvements: Audio issues with first story. Lighting could be stronger on anchor pieces.

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