Fed Up - ID# 268

Bremen

Division: AA

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

Every student knows what it's like to be hungry in class, but what can you do about it?

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/24 4:19 pm - Audio levels needed to be consistent, very distracting. Composition was just ok. Put thought into composition. I liked the repetitive nature of the story and that they remained at the same desks. Good work.
• 4/10 10:36 am - Great premise, very funny. For having all the action set in the same two seats, you definitely built an entire story here that was entertaining and kept rising in action. The culmination was great. Moving forward, I would work on audio to balance the background noise (hiss) and the audio line so there’s a bit more continuity. One way to do this is to get some environment sounds when shooting (just film the noise of the environment you’re in) and put that sound under the entire track. That way, when the girls speak, you won’t have this distinct noise. You have a solid story and the foundational skills to keep making some great movies, keep at it and good luck!
• 4/2 11:43 am - Fed Up Good lighting Good audio Could have been a wider variety of shots Doesn’t make sense, poorly written Not funny

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