Believe - ID# 272

Bremen

Division: AA

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

Growing up can be difficult except when you have a friend to share it with.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/2 11:35 am - Believe Cool parallel of both “ages” putting away bracelets Poor sound design Bad script Camera shots a little shaky/sloppy Bad graphics
• 3/11 4:00 pm - Story: This works on a fundamental level. Overall, I think the pace could be tightened up. Fairly early on, I got that she was growing up and losing her innocence. Camera: Some interesting shots. Nice variety. Some focus issues. But it’s good to see you experimenting with creative ways to use the camera. Lighting: It looks like you used available light for the most part, and it works most of the time. Some low light shots, but not a lot. Sound: Levels are generally adjusted appropriately. Music tracks create the mood. Solid job. Editing: You’ve got the fundamentals right. It all cuts together fairly well, but I didn’t always understand the passage of time. Final Thoughts: Good work. Keep at it.

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