Separate Ways - ID# 288
Wheaton North
Division: AA
Dramatic Narrative
Entry Description
Getting accepted into two of your top choices for college is great. But what will you do if you have to chose between school and your love?
Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/2 11:31 am - Separate Ways Liked how shots were framed, good variety of content Good lighting Nice scenery Music fits Assuming he is getting on that train, characters were on wrong side of tracks Excellent from a technical aspect, but a very basic/boring storyline
- 3/11 12:26 pm - tory: Pretty straightforward but we get it. I honestly feel like it would be more interesting if there were a bit more to the story than we already get from the title. Camera: Some beautiful shots. A nice variety of shots, compositions, and camera moves. I especially like the final close-up of the hands. It might be a bit on the nose, but I thought it was well done. Lighting: Seems like you used available light for the most part, and it generally works. Some of your low-light interiors are a bit yellow for me. And you have a few backlighting issues. But overall, solid work. Sound: Nice music track. Level seems fine. Fade in and out all good. Editing: Nothing too complicated here, but your shots flow and cut together well. Solid job. Final Thoughts: Overall, it’s a little simple but solidly done.
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