feature on celebration of Hannukah in downtown Naperville
Positives: Very interesting topic. Well written script and good job by the on-air talent.
Improvements: Lighting was an issue with many of the shots in this package. Being taped outside at night makes it very difficult but it did need some artificial light added in order for the audience to see what was in each individual shot. A bit more history on these religious ceremonies would've been nice.
Positives: Nice human interest story highlight a community event! Great shots of the creation of the ice sculpture and nice night work :)
Improvements: I would have loved to hear from a few different people to develop a few perspectives of the event
Positives: Nice use of nats off the top – could have taken another beat on the sawing noise before bringing in track. Nice use of nats under track. Liked the menorah in the background – could have still shown that but shot the interview slightly tighter.
Improvements: Track says the event had music singing activities and food – show me all that… or at least some of it… some singing and food? Some broll was sat on too long, and was too dark, and then other, stronger shots were used too quickly.
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