The Horrors of Cheese - ID# 310

Eisenhower

Division: AA

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Entry Description

Two students are up for an unexpected journey, all having to do with the conflicts of cheese and its horrifying effects on the people around them.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/11 4:11 pm - https://drive.google.com/file/d/1oW66w9myhOtH_qDA0kirDtVnS3woii4m/view?usp=sharing
• 3/3 10:59 am - Story: There’s not really much here that the title doesn’t give away. I think you can do better. Camera: Some variety of shot compositions, and you generally use them appropriately. Some framing issues- the guys screaming to each other are way low in the shot. Why? Lighting: Some backlighting issues where the white hallways are lit well but your actors are underexposed. Not a huge issue though. Sound: Some good stuff here. Music, sound FX, dialogue are all generally adjusted well. Editing: Solid, but not sophisticated. Looks like you had some fun with this, but more attention to detail would help. Final thoughts: This feels like something that you’ll enjoy kind of as an inside joke, but for the objective observer, it’s kind of a one-note project. You show promise though. If you ever want to take a crack at a more polished project, I’d be interested to see what you can do.

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