MMEA Fest

A commercial for headphones.

3/11 9:37 pm - good story and the pros of the headphones are clearly explained....the ending is a bit and would benefit from adding the name of the product...try to start the shots with the headphones just being placed on or without the messy looking cords....shots were good
3/9 12:17 pm - Story is clear and intriguing enough to continue to watch. I think the overall mix would have been stronger if you would have played with the music as the headphones come on and off the head of the characters. Some more natural sounds would enhance the production as well. Camera work could be improved with varying angles more. Most of the shots are eye level and lack variety to enhance the tone of the commercial. The concept is good, but still more focus needs to be on the product and not the comedy.
3/7 10:10 am - Strengths: -Story is clear -Identifying some of the benefits of using the headphones was a good idea from a product standpoint Room for Improvement: -Your coverage was a little basic. Most of the shots were in medium or wide. Think about how your cinematography could add to the humor of the piece -The "teacher" in this film committed to the role, however, in order to make it more realistic, it would have been best to find an actual teacher for the role. -The film cuts out abruptly at the end. I think there should be some sort of product logo or slogan at the end. Then fade sound and picture out. -Teacher audio is a little low. It should be hitting between -6 and -12.

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