Teleporter - ID# 336

Wheaton Academy

Division: AA

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

This visual poetry project is originally written, shot and edited by Morgan Finnegan. It follows a young child through his creative mind.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/24 4:25 pm - Loved the story. Cinematography well done! Good Pace and strong edit. Audio really poor levels. Not a comedy. Great work.
• 4/10 10:36 am - This was a wonderful short film that had some captivating images. The perspective of the boy interacting with his family as well as the over the shots of him looking through his teleporter were so interesting and engaging, I applaud your creative efforts. There were some sound issues that were hard to overlook; from the the voice-over with a distinct “noise” in the background to the loop of the music bed with a clear pause before looping, those audio issues can disrupt the “feel” of the piece and take the viewer away from really being part of your work. You have a great handle on creative storytelling and I encourage you to keep working, this was a lot of fun to watch. Keep at it!
• 4/2 11:40 am - Teleporter Well shot Creative idea Little kid did a nice job acting Not enough jokes to be a comedic narrative Audio levels way too low, music at times overpowers voiceover

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