Lanyard Rules YMCA Remix - ID# 355

York

Division: A

School Promotion

Entry Description

A catchy remix of the popular YMCA song to promote our school's new lanyard rules.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/13 11:36 am - Some wobbly shots, or too much headroom; I'm assuming these were your best shots, so additional takes would have helped. Audio quality needs work; needed a better location to record the final audio; vocalist is a little rough.
• 3/13 11:35 am - Clever idea to promote new security rules! However, the text sometimes lacked contrast and was difficult to read.
• 3/12 12:18 pm - Super creative! Great editing. I think there's room for improvement with the camera work.
• 3/12 10:23 am - Strong start with the intro. There is some creativity at work here for sure. The singing portion of the audio seems kind of "thin" to me. Not sure if that's a bad mic or there was something else in mind for that track? Content is edited pretty well with some enthusiastic participation.
• 2/28 11:35 am - Interesting intro and video idea. Audio is a bit muffled. Would make it much stronger if the singing was professional recorded and edited. Sounds like the audio is from singing into the computer mic.

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