Freshman Class 2018 - ID# 350

Maine South

Division: AA

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

Four seniors decide to reinvent themselves right before they leave for college.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/10 10:50 am - This piece has some nice elements to it. The interviews were well framed and sounded great. Your initial setup definitely made me think it was going to be one thing and then it went a different direction, which is always good for funny. However, there seems to be some elements and jokes that are inside jokes for this particular group; from some of the rap lines to the interviews. I would suggest, even with something like this, to have more of a story arch, where we get to know each character better and there is conflict within the group. Then you can include an intro, middle, and end, and the pace would flow. You guys have some great chemistry, keep making films and keep working on crafting the story.
• 4/2 11:39 am - Freshman Class 2018 Shot nicely Good lighting Good location Interesting graphics Not funny Repetitive No distinction between characters

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