"A Dream and a Thimble Change" - News Story - Grace Houdek - 2018 - ID# 368

South Elgin

Division: AA

News Package

Entry Description

News Package. An unassuming seamstress who has a brush with fame is the subject of this human interest piece.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/10 10:59 am - Great story here, I was interested from beginning to end and that’s testament to your understanding of how to build the story on each piece of information you provide. Nice work. Your B-Roll, interview, and voice-over all were executed nicely with very little problems and I especially liked the b-roll of the shop to set the scene. There were a couple errors in editing were an errant clip or a too-fast cut happened which threw off the pace of your piece. I would also encourage you to always include an outro so the subject isn’t the last person speaking. Overall, though, nice work!

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