Joey Sinopoli Cinema Reel - ID# 360

John Hersey High School
Division: A
Cinematography

Entry Description

A cinema reel made from videos made this past year

Recent Teacher Comments

  • 3/21 1:01 pm - Pros - A couple of nice rack focuses especially of the girl to the street lamp. In addition your strongest compositions involve tight shots of your subjects, the skateboard and the cross. Cons - I noted your strongest shots because I want you to study their compositions and use of light that help to create depth. Most of the rest of the shots stray away from these principles, leaving the image appearing either muddy, flat, or somewhat uninteresting (i.e. the guy in the woods). If your desire to shoot handheld work on your crab walk and steadiness to improve the quality of your work. Keep shooting!
  • 3/12 11:00 am - Some of the shots are long and feel random. Be careful not to make sure all shots are in focus. Need a better ending...need to end on your best shots. Some shots need a tripod
  • 3/12 8:19 am - I like the boxing shot and the way you moved the camera with the action. Other shots need a bit more in regards to the way the action was framed.
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