MLK Day at the HP Rec Center - ID# 400

Highland Park

Division: AA

News Package

Entry Description

Last Martin Luther King Day, the Highland Park Rec Center hosted an event covered by HPTV's Ashley Garcia. This piece was conformed to fit the time constraints of our school's daily video announcements.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/10 11:05 am - You have a great start here. Your opening sequence was a bit noisy. You have some great B-Roll and your interview was nice. However, I’m not really sure of what this piece is about. It took over a minute before you explained what the rec center was doing and the connection to MLK Jr. Day. Your voice-over at the end summed everything up but probably could have appeared earlier so we know why Declan is there . Keep digging on these stories, you definitely have a nice control over the camera and you have a nice, clean edit (though your music gets a bit overpowering at times). I would encourage you to work

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