Rainbow - ID# 403

John Hersey High School

Division: A

Music Video

Entry Description

A girl trying to accept herself as a person, with the help of her friends and her love of dancing.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/12 9:54 pm - It's an emotion piece, I just never felt connected. The shots didn't seem to really be telling any story here. Many are artistic, but beyond that I'm not sure what to make of it.
• 3/10 3:31 pm - Dancer is very talented! Nice subject to choose. I like the idea of having a dance throughout the video, as it is an emotional song. At times, the cutaways feel random and the mood of the song does not always match the footage. Some of the cutaway shots are unique and meaningful, and I think more could be used.

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