My project focuses on many teens playing a variety of sports. The goal is to show that there is a sport out there for anyone and for everyone.
Positives: I like the different shots. Feet on the diving board, on the football field, etc. I liked how you were able to convey the message without a single word being said out loud.
Improvements: Some of the shots were a bit dark (at the pool, wrestling). I get the message is "find your sport", but why? Also, maybe include a sport that isn't so dependent on being physically gifted, like bowling or golf.
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Positives: Good variety of sports / shots represented. Outdoor shots look great!
Improvements: Your indoor shots could use some color help. Just brightening them up and color-balancing would make them look much better. This is basically a montage of student athletes, sort of like a Gatorade or Nike ad, but the message might be stronger if you included even more sports and accelerated the edit as it progressed.
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