MMEA Fest

Why do you need a phone when you buy a Gameboy?

3/11 8:55 pm - Commercial lacks cohesive point and drags out a bit to long....be aware of making a point with each shot...perhaps some music to move story along and stay on point with product....it felt a bit like you were trying to sell to many things
3/9 12:14 pm - The commercial doesn't sell the product. I appreciate the attempt at humor, but in terms of overall design and aesthetic the commercial has much work needed. Focus on the product and what consumers would like in it.
3/6 10:40 am - Strengths: -I appreciate your absurd sense of humor and the commitment of the main actor Weaknesses: -You have only had the studio space available to you, but it would have been nice for this to have been shot outside of the classroom. Revealing that we are in a classroom makes this appear to be much less professional. -I know that this commercial is a joke in nature, but it does not effectively sell the product because it is a joke

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