MMEA Fest

This video is about making a plastic object, using a procces which includes clay, silicone, legos and etc.

4/24 9:55 pm - Keepers: Very interesting topic and it was well explained to the point that I feel like I could do this activity successfully just by watching this video. Each step was well explained, striking the right balance of generalization and specificity. The voice over was delivered in a pleasant, professional manner. Improvements: The production value, overall needed work. I know you said that the finished clay model would be fixed up later, but I never really had any understanding as to what you specifically created. The shots revealing the model at the end were unclear and you never stated what you created. It would have been better to have spoke to this a bit or to state what it was you created. The whole production needed better lighting, particularly at the end when the finished product was revealed. This is the most important part of the demonstration piece. It's the payoff and it needed more attention with better composed shots and lighting. Audio needed mixing. Your voice over was only coming in on one channel on the left side and your music did well in terms of pacing, but it was also only on one channel. Combined, it was a bit of a distracting mix.
3/11 4:00 pm - https://drive.google.com/file/d/1MadCvD5oIjnggc6W0ZJuSyxbhvgsLvo6/view?usp=sharing

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