That’s Touching - ID# 441

Riverside Brookfield

Division: A

Music Video

Entry Description

An original piece of music by isaac lawrence with natural visual backgrounds

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/12 10:03 pm - Kudos on the original song. I will say the audio didn't always match the singer. There didn't seem to be much of a story to follow here. The shots are strong and I appreciate the care and effort put into the framing.
• 3/11 10:13 pm - A unique concept and I love that you created a video for an original song. Some of your shots are composed really strongly, and others feel a little anticlimactic. I think your video could consider its narrative a bit more purposefully to create a more powerful storyline.

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