3/9 10:41 am - This is a news package and does not meet the requirements of the category. Natural Audio News Package does not have reporter track in it.
3/6 3:51 pm - Positives - good shot variety and information presented was well organized
Improvements- camera work was distracting because of the shaking. This is more of a package and less of a natural audio package as the only natural audio was the background noise.
2/27 9:47 am - Good time lapse and establishing shots. Lots of distracting audio during the interviews, was a mic used? Camera footage looks shaky and possibly filmed on a phone. Voiceover is informative and well done.