Holiday Activities News Package 2017 - ID# 451

York

Division: A

Natural Audio News Package

Entry Description

Things to do this upcoming holiday season! :)

Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/9 10:41 am - This is a news package and does not meet the requirements of the category. Natural Audio News Package does not have reporter track in it.
• 3/6 3:51 pm - Positives - good shot variety and information presented was well organized Improvements- camera work was distracting because of the shaking. This is more of a package and less of a natural audio package as the only natural audio was the background noise.
• 2/27 9:47 am - Good time lapse and establishing shots. Lots of distracting audio during the interviews, was a mic used? Camera footage looks shaky and possibly filmed on a phone. Voiceover is informative and well done.

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