2 worlds collide - ID# 463

Mundelein

Division: AA

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

Two teenagers dozing off in class seem to have a system to stay out of trouble, until something unexpected happens.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/10 10:49 am - Great premise, nice shot choices, and great audio work. Overall, you have a very nice piece here. Moving forward I would work on building some of the comedy more through the dramatic sequences.
• 4/2 11:44 am - 2 Worlds Collide Interesting premise Poorly executed concept Used copyrighted music

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