A look at all of the most diverse aspects of the most diverse high school in Illinois.
Positives: Camera - the moving shots are well-composed and keep the energy commensurate with the music. The moves are of similar pace relative to the composition. Editing - the segments of the piece are grouped thematically, largely transitioning with the music. This helps create the sense of story.
Improvements: Editing - Cuts are sometimes with the beat, sometimes not. This misses the opportunity to reinforce the feel. Camera - some shots in similar environments are inconsistently exposed.
Positives: creative diverse set of shots. edited to music well
Improvements: intro building shot could have better compostion
Positives: Nice camera work Nice editing Good diversity of subjects Good movement with the video
Improvements: The sound track didn't really fit with the video, it didn't help tell the story. I think the story could have been told in 1:00, a little bit too long.
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