Cheetos Chase - ID# 478

Back of the Yards College Prep

Division: AA

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

An original short film written, directed and edited by Erick Lucero.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/10 10:50 am - This had some great moments but a lot of your actors. They were fun to watch and I enjoyed the the main “teacher” kid and his responses. Moving forward, I would work on balancing your shot choices with the drama you’re building and the music build up. You have the same music for the first part but there are different dramatic moments that deserve more build up, or a change in music (or no music at all) to emphasize the drama (and subsequently the comedy as well). The chair element needed more introduction as well as suddenly students and staff were using chairs to get around but that wasn’t ever set up for a reason why. You have some great pieces here, keep working at it and you’ll continue to produce some great work!
• 4/2 11:43 am - Cheetos Chase Terrible audio Not funny at all Incoherent plot Why are people rolling around on chairs

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