YHS Basketball - ID# 470

York
Division: A
School Promotion

Entry Description

Watch Josiah Scott and L.J. Galdo show you just how close knit the York Basketball team is and the people that make up the stitches.

Recent Teacher Comments

  • 3/13 11:29 am - Music works great, and the slow mo is a nice touch. However the off-camera interview questions detract from the success of this piece. The responses need to include the question to avoid this type of audio problem.
  • 3/12 11:55 am - Nice job editing together footage with the interview. I think the interview should have a different background... Maybe of the gym, etc. the green background is a little boring.
  • 3/12 10:06 am - I like how slow motion was used in this piece as well as some of the creative transition wipes. I'm not sure that we need to hear the interviewer's questions-- this might work better with solidly edited sound bites from coach instead-- that way the the narrative would seem to drive itself? The elements that are contained in this are very strong, I think with some more post production planning, this piece would stand on it's own really, really well.
  • 2/28 11:18 am - Great shots, nice choice in music. The audio seems to double during the opening dialogue. Ask the interviewee to repeat the question so you don't need the voice off camera. Would be better to interview the coach on the court.
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