Ballerz - ID# 486

Back of the Yards College Prep

Division: AA

Documentary

Entry Description

A short documentary film by David Morales

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/26 2:06 pm - Opening should’ve been a voiceover instead of a series of title cards. Framing of interviews are off. Audio quality on interviews are tinny. More diverse broll is needed. Give courtesy to images and broll that aren’t your property. Mic up your interview subjects.
• 4/10 1:39 pm - Good idea to profile three different players but better broll will really help make this much more interesting and engaging to your audience. Work on capturing your audio from a secondary source and then matching it up. You can even do it with a smartphone closer to their face or interviewing them in a less echo-y space. The extreme low angle of the two guys doesn't present them as well as a traditionally positioned head shot.

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