Fabrication - ID# 483

Maine East

Division: AA

Dramatic Narrative

Entry Description

A boy realizes his dream life is not all that it appears to be.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/2 11:33 am - Fabrication Very bad audio, at times, can’t tell what character is saying Bad lighting Should not have tried to fake a movie theater; next time, just go to one Shoot for realism, please do not try to fake funeral home Poor sound design Have no idea what is going on Use of “Way Cool Jr,” a copyrighted song
• 3/11 3:01 pm - Story: I only get this on a basic level. The kid’s having a great day, stops to consider that it might be a dream, starts to see people disappear, sees himself dead, and then disappears himself. Probably all makes sense to you, but I’m a little lost. Camera: Some good work. Nothing stands out as particularly dazzling or problematic. Lighting: Looks like you were pretty dependent on available light. For much of it, your white balance seems pretty purple to me. And the whole Groundhog Day sequence was super dark. Most of the rest of it was pretty solid. Sound: The scene where he’s reflecting on his good day is overmodulated pretty badly. Otherwise, your levels were pretty decent. Editing: Your fundamentals are pretty solid. Final Thoughts: Some creative ideas here. Keep at it.

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