MMEA Fest

The steps for a successful homecoming experience.

3/13 11:21 am - The music doesn't connect to homecoming or make the story better--it seems a little odd and never builds or concludes. If you have a music bed, your story should be better with it than without it.
3/13 11:20 am - Interesting concept using the black backdrop to make it look like a continuous shot! Careful of too much headroom in some shots.
3/13 11:20 am - The story is an interesting idea, but if you have to say "The End" you didn't really have a good way to wrap it up.
3/12 11:46 am - Camera movement was really cool. I feel like this is missing something in the storyline for this. Seems to end abruptly I was waiting for something else to happen.
3/12 9:47 am - I like the endless black background and the way this was lit. The camera movement used for transitions was to subsequent shots was creative. This piece started strong but didn't have a "big finish" if that makes sense? I think with some reworking and some effort to finish with what would be a nice homecoming visual, this has potential!
2/28 9:13 am - The movement of the camera is a unique idea but at times a little awkward. The voiceover is monotone and not adding to the video. However a very clever idea and if enhanced could be very strong.

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