The Dress - ID# 73

Marist

Division: AA

TV Show

Entry Description

My submission to the 2018 MMEA film festival

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/24 11:49 am - Better to actually use audio from a handheld mic. Jump cuts not executed as breaking the rules, looked like mistakes. Story absurd and kind of entertaining. Good pace and great energy.
• 4/16 8:56 am - Nice attempt at a pseudo reality show presentation on the drama involving the 2 girls and the prom dress. Technically it is a bit weak, audio is low and some of the shots are blurry. Acting is pretty mediocre.

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