Quinn and Jon Make a Movie - ID# 74

Marist

Division: AA

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

Jon is up to another crazy scheme again, this time he's dragging Quinn along to make a movie. Shenanigans ensue including movie parodies, original humor, and even drama. Get ready for a fun time.

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/10 10:38 am - This was a lot of fun to watch. Rarely is the dialogue from two high school filmmakers this entertaining but I was thoroughly entertained. There were a couple of moments that were unclear but your interview shots definitely helped tell the story. Moving forward, I would encourage you to plan a little more about how to use editing and filming techniques to differentiate the three different shots; “film”, “interview”, and “candid”. You sort of move from one to the other and while it’s clear at times, there are other times where it took me a minute to realize what I was watching. Keep working. There is a lot of talent and clever writing here, just slow down and write out the jokes. My personal favorite: ““Three Health Insurances…” Very funny!
• 4/2 11:40 am - Jon and Quinn Make a Movie Really bad audio levels Uneven lighting Almost every shot was badly framed; bad headroom, people cut out of shots Same shots stay on way too long, especially the first shot Many shots unstable, shaky

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