Waubonsie Valley Orchesis Promo 2018 - ID# 92

Waubonsie Valley
Division: A
School Promotion

Entry Description

Short video promoting the school's orchesis dance program show

Recent Teacher Comments

  • 3/13 11:43 am - Shot variety is holding this piece back--all the shots are long or med-long shots; some close-ups, tilts or low-level flat shots from different locations in the room could have added interest.
  • 3/13 11:43 am - Nice use of slow-mo and strobe effect; great job editing to the music; Blur at the end provides a nice backdrop to the info, but the multi-colored title makes it difficult to read.
  • 3/13 11:43 am - Engaging opening sequence! Dynamic story to promote the event.
  • 3/12 12:23 pm - Great editing with together with the speed!
  • 3/12 12:06 pm - I like manipulation of speed used during this promo. The strobe effect matches the snare in the music really well, you picked good spots for that effect. Different camera shots are cut together well too. I think adding some file footage of the actual show from a previous year, mixed with what you have here would be a nice touch too, but maybe the footage doesn't exist? Good job putting this together!
  • 2/28 11:48 am - Great shots, song selection, and matching the edits to the tempo. The flicker effect adds to the video. One suggestion would be to add a voiceover or an interview audio on top of the dance footage.
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